8-9:- back of the head too flat- pattern under the head is cut- page in RGB- overleveled11: overleveled (23:1:250 would be the right level as to not lose the details, especially the clouds)17: text.
"youngking", the page is too dark so the finer details are lost, there is some dust to burn in panel 1 (next to the second bubble) and it's a bit overfiltered."sunday", the redraw in itself is better even if there is still improvement needed on the patterns on top, the wood and the back of the guy.as for the rest, the page needs a better filtering"P398", the gradient pattern on top and bottom panel suffered a bit when leveling but the page overall is good. Could be used but improvement are still possible."mag", too dark and overleveled, some white dogding would be necessary on the letter on top left.